Showing posts with label The Song of Forgotten Stars. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Song of Forgotten Stars. Show all posts

Thursday, July 08, 2021

Diggin' Up Bones (#AmWriting)

 The other day I was looking for something completely different in my archives, and I found a post from July 2010, eleven years ago:

I haven't talked about writing in a while, so here's a brief note about it. My main energy lately has been going to the space opera project I've had in my head for seven or eight years now; it's an idea that's been kicking around and kicking around and kicking around, until I finally decided that hell, it was just time to start writing the thing. The entire long-form story involves two princesses from some planet who leave their world to take their first trip to the Galactic Capital, or something like that. But on the way, their starship experiences some [ahem] technical difficulties and they end up on a strange planet they've never heard of before.

All the set-up and such took me through eight chapters, all well and good. All the while I've maintained two files, in which I keep lists of my characters as I introduce them (or merely mention them), and lists of the locations I either use or mention. This way I'm not scrounging about later, wondering what star systems I needed names for, or who lives where, that sort of thing. I'm not one to make big encyclopedia-type profiles for my characters -- my theory is that if the character's favorite movie or preferred sleepwear comes up in the course of the story, my character will fill in the blanks when we get to that point -- but I do want to be able to keep things straight.

So anyway, my two princesses have just arrived on Planet Whosis, which is ruled by A Guy, who has A Son.

And I don't have names for any of them. Not the Planet, not the Guy, not the Son (actually, I do have a name for the Son), not the Possibly Evil Councillor, not the Leader of the Rebel Faction, and certainly not the Odd Looking But Extremely Lethal Weapon They Use On This Planet.

As far as I can tell, this is the first time I mentioned in this space the writing project that became Stardancer. At this point I didn't have a title for that book, and I certainly didn't have a title for the entire series! I didn't come up with The Song of Forgotten Stars until not long before I had to have the book ready for publishing. At this point I had my main characters: Tariana, Margeth, and Lt. Rasharri, and not much else. Tariana's name was actually Tarina at first, but I didn't like the way that sounded so I added the extra vowel syllable. I seem to recall modifying Lt. Rasharri's name in some way, but I don't recall exactly how.

At that point I had the basic scenario down, but one set of character relationships didn't work at first, so I had to make some significant changes, making Prince Joskin not the son of the actual mad King but of the son of the mad King's brother...and at this point I had no idea that Master Gharanas, who was just a guy who showed up at one point where I needed a hot-tempered young man to burst angrily onto the scene, would stick around as the story's single most important male character and eventual love interest to Princess Tariana.

Now I'm writing the fifth book in this series, this many years later, and looking back at the very beginning feels...interesting. It's like looking at something that's familiar but isn't quite a memory, if that makes any sense. And to think that the main idea for The Song of Forgotten Stars actually came to me ten years before that....


Saturday, January 02, 2021

An ANNOUNCEMENT!!!

 I could stretch all of this out, but instead: On January 21, I shall relaunch THE SONG OF FORGOTTEN STARS, by re-issuing the first three books in revised editions with new covers, and by releasing Book Four, THE SAVIOR WORLDS!!!

So, what's involved in the revised editions? Glad you asked! Here's the rundown:

::  Nothing has changed in the body of the texts. This is not a George Lucas type of "Special Edition" wherein I change that one scene so Princess Tariana does not shoot first.

::  I've made some different choices with typefaces within the books themselves. Stardancer's first edition wasn't in the same typeface as The Wisdomfold Path or Amongst the Stars, which has bugged me for a while. Also I changed chapter heading fonts and tweaked the opening words of each chapter, employing an "Art Deco" kind of font that I think pays small tribute to the old-school sci-fi adventure tales that are a part of the inspiration for this series.

::  Each book will now have a Dramatis personae inside, which I always find helpful in novels, and after Stardancer, each book contains a summation of the entire story to that point.

::  The covers are revised to have more visual "pop". On the original covers, the choice of fonts and colors led to the titles and my author credit not really leaping off the paper, so I've redone that. I have retained the original art I commissioned, though! I shifted them down slightly to make more room for title copy.

Here's how the books look now!

Title page:

Revised editions 1: New title pages! Note the "deco" font, replacing an old script font. Suggests what these books are: old school space opera! #amwriting #writersofinstagram #WritingCommunity #sciencefiction #spaceopera #forgottenstars

Chapter beginning (from Amongst the Stars):

Revised editions 3: Starting with Book 3 (AMONGST THE STARS), chapters aren't numbered but identified by POV character. #amwriting #writersofinstagram #WritingCommunity #sciencefiction #spaceopera #forgottenstars

Dramatis personae (from Stardancer):

Revised editions 4: Now each book has a 'Dramatis Personae'! #amwriting #writersofinstagram #WritingCommunity #sciencefiction #spaceopera #forgottenstars

And, all four new covers!

STARDANCER full cover

THE WISDOMFOLD PATH full cover

AMONGST THE STARS full cover

THE SAVIOR WORLDS full cover

More to come, but set the calendars for January 21!


Monday, October 15, 2018

DONE

So this happened over the weekend:

THE DRAFT IS DONE!!! #amwriting #writersofinstagram #sciencefiction #spaceopera #forgottenstars #ahhh #huzzah #woot

At last. At long, long, lllooonnnggg last! This book took very nearly an entire year to get done, after I started it for NaNoWriMo last year. Oy!

By way of stats, the first draft topped out just shy of 194,000 words, which is longer than Stardancer and The Wisdomfold Path, but not as long as Amongst the Stars. I really am trying, as this series progresses, to keep each book in the same ballpark, length-wise. I don't want to have a problem with massive ballooning once I get to the latter part of the series, a problem which vexed JK Rowling with the Harry Potter books and George RR Martin with the Song of Ice and Fire series.

By way of story, this book launches the middle third of the larger story. Things start to get darker this time around (but never fear, I have no plans to go "Full Grimdark" in these books), and the story starts to get, well, larger in scope. The action is no longer limited to just the planet Xonareth. And if you like the lindiath--the six-legged bear-cats who always seem to turn up when most needed--this book will be for you. Lots of lindiath in this one! And not all of them are nice.

What's next? The usual "fallow" period in which I don't even look at the manuscript for at least three months, and then first edits. First edits result in the draft that goes to beta readers, and then based on their input I generate the second edits. Then the final version goes off to those who proofread...and then, it's time to get the thing ready. The upshot is that I wouldn't expect this book to be out in the world until early 2020, at my most optimistic.

But still, it's done. Huzzah!

Thursday, May 25, 2017

"The stars always exact a price": AMONGST THE STARS is out!!!

AMONGST THE STARS is out today! Details at ForgottenStars.net! #amwriting #AmongstTheStars #ForgottenStars #sciencefiction #spaceopera #indiebooks

What are you waiting for? The book is available now! Find out what happens next in the saga of Princesses Tariana and Margeth and their trusty pilot, Lt. Rasharri!

Details at ForgottenStars.net!

Monday, May 15, 2017

In other news....

Two developments:

:: Amongst the Stars: The Song of Forgotten Stars Book III will be available on May 25! As is my usual practice, the book will be in paperback first with e-books to follow a couple of weeks later. And I am planning to start selling signed copies of all my books through ForgottenStars.net!

I'm calling it, folks! MAY 25 IS RELEASE DAY!!! #amwriting #ForgottenStars #amongstthestars #sciencefiction #spaceopera #indiebooks

Front cover:

IT'S MY FRONT COVER YOU GUYS!!! #amwriting #ForgottenStars #AmongstTheStars #sciencefiction #spaceopera #soon

Back cover copy:

ANNNNNND, the back-cover copy! I wrote the HELL out of this book, folks. I can't wait for it to be out there! #amwriting #ForgottenStars #AmongstTheStars #sciencefiction #spaceopera #soon

I've already posted the first two chapters to ForgottenStars.net, and there will be a third chapter up later this week, probably Thursday.

:: The jury is still out on this particular development on the home front. I'm sure we'll get it all figured out, but for now, things are a bit of a whirlwind at Casa Jaquandor.

Meet the source of the whirlwind: Carla, aka Dee-oh-gee 2.0.

Carla. Sigh. #Carla #DogsOfInstagram

What is this 'popcorn' of which you speak? #Carla #dogsofinstgram

So there we are.

Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Hey! CHAPTER TWO!!!

Hot on the heels of yesterday's posting of Chapter One...here is Chapter TWO!!!

Go read it. Do it for the children. Do it for the trees. Do it for America, or for whichever country you call home.

The Wisdomfold Path launches two weeks from today!

Monday, October 26, 2015

Monday, October 19, 2015

Oh, did I mention my new BOOK COVER???

I didn't mention that? Really? At least, I didn't mention it here? Sorry!

Head on over to ForgottenStars.net to see the cover art (and the back cover, complete with blurby bits) to The Wisdomfold Path! It's awesome!

The book launches November 10. Beat the rush!

Saturday, October 11, 2014

Don't take MY word for it! (Again)

Another of my beta-readers weighs in. Getting SamuraiFrog's approval was really huge to me. His tastes and mine intersect frequently, but we have enough areas of disagreement that I knew he wasn't a sure thing, and he's whip-smart, so if he doesn't like something, he can tell you exactly why, with often brutal force and surgical precision. That he responded to the book as warmly as he did (while still making some useful observations along the way) is a definite boost in the confidence I feel for my own story.

And if you haven't seen them yet, check out the book trailer and the cover art at ForgottenStars.net! This coming Wednesday I will post the complete Chapter One.