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Saturday, February 23, 2013

Saturday Centus

I pretty straightforward prompt this week...let's see what we can tease out of it.

She crossed her arms. “Gimme a compliment, or I’m outta here.”

“OK...uhhh...OK, here. Without you around, I sleep like a baby.”

She grabbed her purse. “Nice try.”

“No, wait! Ever hear a baby sleep? They wake up crying every ten minutes, and they only sleep until they get held. That’s what I’m like. I can’t sleep unless I know you’re there to hold me.”

She looked at him, eyes narrowed. Then she put down her purse.

“OK, fine. You got me for one more night.”

“Should I turn down the sheets?”

“Let’s not push it.”

“Right....”

8 comments:

  1. ha ha ha-very nice and smooth talking!

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  2. Very smooth and creative.
    Blessings

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  3. Very smooth indeed.
    Nicely done and very creative.
    Bessings

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  4. brilliant, I love how you turned that around

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  5. This sounds sooooo familiar! Good take on the prompt!!

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  6. I really liked this! Very nice.

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  7. Oh what a sneak, lol. Loved this.

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  8. OMG!

    I'm laughing so hard at this!

    I love the way you think!

    I love the way you write!

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